Friday, June 6, 2008

Hurt Comments

Rating: 4.5

I'm sorry that I'm not perfect,
I'm sorry I make mistakes,
I'm sorry I'm not the perfect child,
But can't you love me for who I am?
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Allison Hankins
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 June 2008

The hurt in this prose piece was well expressed by the writer. She surely convinced me this was genuine stuff. That is great communication. So, I gave this a nine. A well deserved nine. GW62

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~ Jon London ~ 09 June 2008

This is great...very well composed piece....... 'ACTIONS' speak louder than words.....also I feel in this poem, that people shouldn't mistake kindness for weakness in you Allison..... stay strong.......keep expressing Jon

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Allison Hankins

Allison Hankins

Petosky, Minnesota
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