My soul is the kite
Tagged to the string of the body
Wind of life plays with me
Takes me to the sky
Drops me low
I am free
But not free
I meet strangers on my way
Some become friends
And we move together
Hand in hand
Some behave as enemies
With plans to pull me down
To fall flat on the ground
Tattered and bruised
I move on up and up
Till evening comes
And I am dragged down
With the spool of age
My soul is the kite Tagged to the string of the body Wind of life plays with me Takes me to the sky.....wonderful expression! A beautiful poem...............10
I so admire the comparing of yourself to a kite. It is so clever, an excellent analogy. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We keep soaring into the sky until fate pulls us down. Many factors help us in our upward movement like our friends, relatives and well wishers, but our enemies try to bring us down! We are all kites waiting for the wind of others' support to soar higher in life. Beautiful comparison!
That is a very amazing compliment. Feeling honored getting such a nice comment from a renowned poetess. Regards.