I Am A Note Poem by Jazmin Baird

I Am A Note

Rating: 5.0


I am a Note, a note that is dieing,
My maker, she wont stop crying.
She writes me over and over,
And all she keeps doing is lieing.

She lies to his face,
It brakes her embrace.
All she wants to do is run,
All she wants to do is race.

Her head aches,
He sees the tears.
Her heart brakes,
And thats what he fears.

She makes her self smile,
He says 'Havent seen that for a while! ! '
She just nods her head then turns for the door,
Looks like she could go for miles...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kristina B; Williams 08 July 2009

HAD TO GIVE GUITAR, GOODBYE, N THIS 1 ALL 10S..PLEASE FIND THE TIME TO VOTE ON MINE, EVEN IF YOU DONT FIND THE TIME TO READ EM ALL STILL VOTE WITH HONEST 3 10S, MY NEW POETIC FRIEND...I HAVE 6 NEWEST 1S, MY LATEST IS EMBERS, N A FIRE, ABLAZE..PLEASE SEND ME YOUR COMMENTS N INVITES

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Chitra - 04 July 2009

the shades or rather the the highs and lows (notes) of love...well orchestrated

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Marieta Maglas 03 July 2009

''She lies to his face, It brakes her embrace. All she wants to do is run, All she wants to do is race.'' wonderful poem, I feel i can understand you...10 from me

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Michelle Mcgath 02 July 2009

Very nice. It seems we both feel the same! ! LOL.

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Rachel Martin 02 July 2009

very deep. & showing stages of going through love.

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