Thursday, August 10, 2017

I Am Here Because You Were There Comments

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I am here because you were there


When the wind growled over the roof
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Pushpa Ratnayake
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 August 2017

When I fathomed unfathomable when l strived with tears and sweat you were there holding my hand............ i need yu always........ and you were there. sense of love and nearness and togethereness. protection, belongingness. without all that we cannot live...... thank you dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 15 August 2017

Beautiful tribute to a loving mum, insightfully brought forth from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Pushpa.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem on memories of mother, Pushpa. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2017

You have fathomed unfathomable memories that wind carries in nature and moon has phases. Nature mother cares for moon to grow into full moon as a child grows like moon at home by care and affection of mother. Mother is in backdoor of child to support even in front-door. Mother has great vision and role in development of child. An interesting verse is beautifully penned and shared here. This is a great tribute to your mother too. She will feel proud of you. Excellent poem is shared....Rating 10 out of 10 for you. WELCOME TO POEMHUNTER.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 August 2017

womderful nature, moon makes shadows

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