Kumarmani Mahakul

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I Am In Your Lap - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Oh mom I am in your lap
Every day in cheer I do clap.
By grace sure I get you ever.
I walk around forget never.

You are my beloved mother,
To get you wait birth another.
You nourish me but I do cry,
Watching soon face does dry.

You flow being river in heart,
You make children more smart.
Drinking the nectar we walk all
We stand beside you do not fall.

Tall becomes the personality
While we follow your originality.
Your grace is whole powerful turn
I am lucky being your lovely son.

You only teach me to sing for God,
I know him mother and do nod.
Broad visions you ever fix for me,
Through your eyes world I do see.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, mother, mother and child , spiritual


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is written on 18 November 2014 in Deogarh, Odish, India and dedicated to the people of the world.

Comments about I Am In Your Lap by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Valsa George (9/7/2019 7:54:00 AM)

    Broad visions you ever fix for me,
    Through your eyes world I do see.......

    A mother is priceless. In the lap of a mother, every child finds security! As long as the child is around the mother, her watchful eyes will follow him and he is free from all dangers. A lovely poem extolling the greatness of a mother!
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  • (2/27/2019 4:27:00 PM)

    God's lap is nice. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet. Living with God is good. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2016 4:31:00 AM)

    The safest place on earth and the lap where we dream so many things and listens to everything with attention, a perfect learning place, ....Loved it 1+++
    You only teach me to sing for God,
    I know him mother and do nod.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (10/7/2016 4:27:00 AM)

    Being your lovely son, I am happy. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/7/2016 4:12:00 AM)

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    xThis is beautiful. I really felt this piece and think it is written rather well.
    2 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply
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    xA pleasure to read in these troublesome days due honour to mother from a grateful son. A lovely poem indeed.
    2 Dec 2014 by Fay Slimm | Reply
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    xGreat read!
    12 Dec 2014 by mahesh nanayakkara | Reply
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    xNice one!
    26 Jan 2015 by Charuk Suebrak | Reply
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 7, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, February 25, 2019


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