I Am In Your Lap Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

I Am In Your Lap

Rating: 5.0

Oh mom I am in your lap
Every day in cheer I do clap.
By grace sure I get you ever.
I walk around forget never.

You are my beloved mother,
To get you wait birth another.
You nourish me but I do cry,
Watching soon face does dry.

You flow being river in heart,
You make children more smart.
Drinking the nectar we walk all
We stand beside you do not fall.

Tall becomes the personality
While we follow your originality.
Your grace is whole powerful turn
I am lucky being your lovely son.

You only teach me to sing for God,
I know him mother and do nod.
Broad visions you ever fix for me,
Through your eyes world I do see.

Friday, October 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,mother,mother and child ,spiritual
This poem is written on 18 November 2014 in Deogarh, Odish, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2016

picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xThis is beautiful. I really felt this piece and think it is written rather well. 2 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xA pleasure to read in these troublesome days due honour to mother from a grateful son. A lovely poem indeed. 2 Dec 2014 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of mahesh nanayakkara xGreat read! 12 Dec 2014 by mahesh nanayakkara | Reply picture of Charuk Suebrak xNice one! 26 Jan 2015 by Charuk Suebrak | Reply Note: These review comments are received via poetfreak (PF)

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Dogma Daniman 22 October 2020

Remaining in God's lap is good. God is mother like our mother. Remaining with mother is nice.

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Valsa George 07 September 2019

Broad visions you ever fix for me, Through your eyes world I do see....... A mother is priceless. In the lap of a mother, every child finds security! As long as the child is around the mother, her watchful eyes will follow him and he is free from all dangers. A lovely poem extolling the greatness of a mother!

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

God's lap is nice. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet. Living with God is good.

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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2016

The safest place on earth and the lap where we dream so many things and listens to everything with attention, a perfect learning place, ....Loved it 1+++ You only teach me to sing for God, I know him mother and do nod.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 October 2016

Being your lovely son, I am happy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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