I am that girl Trisey.
I am that 15 yr. old girl, from Inkster, born from Detroit. [est.1991]
I am that dark-skinned, big lipped, pretty when she wants, ugly when she has to be...
I am the black little girl that everyone in the household depends on.
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.........your poem has too many 'I am's' - a tad self-indulgent don't you think?