I Am Not Arrogant Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Am Not Arrogant

Rating: 5.0


As people put and want
To paint me little rude
But it is all preludes

Why some one should feel afraid?
When fact is honestly laid
For review or consideration
It is good to have strong relation

People are fond of self appreciation
They want it on the face without nay question
Not that they are perfect and need it as recognition
But want it to satisfy ego and feel self elation

Some equally greedy man may go after it
Praise work and when time comes to beat
He will have opportunity seized at convenience
You will be cheated with no feeling of its presence

“Beware of opportunist” slogan appears
But hardly few realize and avoid fear
They know whom to trust and discard
They can easily go ahead and look forward

“Never be straight forward” where it is not needed
Words are not to be spoken if they are not likely to be heeded
Most important thing is its utterances at right time
You got to be on guard at all the times

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

I am not arrogant As people put and want

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Glad Mubiangata35 minutes ago thanks for sharing good job keep it up

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2013

Some Girl By sitting things out and observing a lot over time, we come to realise....truth.....from propaganda :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2013

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR Yes, an egotistic proclivity as well as a regular agenda of opportinistity carries questionable artistic merit. However I must say I am a bit taken aback in seeing this stance coming from someone who recommends his own work in the box that is meant to recommend poems you have read by others & were especially moved by...between that, and the obvious need to copy & paste comments you have received on other sites than this one, has admittedly got me scratching my head a tad....BTW: I believe you would garner far more positive feedback if (1) You did not alienate 80% of this sites membership by posting many of your poems in hindi, and (2) You found it in your own ego to swallow pride and actually read & critique those who have been regular loyal supporters & commentors of your work, here, on PF, despite your polarising actions. Look, don't portray me or this feedback wrogly, as it is merely an I.M.O. based on personal observation. I realise that I have NOT been one of your regular supporters, and certainly have never expected to be one of yours. I hope you take my opine and advice in as positive a vein as it may not have came across, but was meant to be. Good Luck in your literary travels & Be Well ~FjR~

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2013

Re: I am not arrogant (Score: 1) by ApplesSt.Pain on Friday, August 23,2013 (19: 17: 09) too weak, put the kids to sleep, blanket your sin to keep warn, thoughts wash a shore, I can do so much better, I've had my head up in a cloud, I start to wake up to the truth I can't do this any more, I'm just too weak. put the kids to sleep..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

awesome Jill Scrivana36 minutes ago I really like this a lot the theme of honesty is prominent Comment +1 Great context Glad Mubiangata35 minutes ago thanks for sharing good job keep it up

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

awesome Lara Lynne36 minutes ago EXCELLENT! I loved everything about it. Well done. Comment +1 well done

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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