Thursday, January 5, 2012

I Am (Unraveled) Comments

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i am, become...
i am the fallen tree,
the broken lamp, the axe,
the message never received.
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Jacqui Broad 06 January 2012

I like this poem, sir. You mention things that brings nostalgia. Mother's favorite pot, father's pipe, whiskey. A good poem about what makes life worth living for...

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