I Can Become Comments

i can be me for the very firsttime under hostile cages and locks i finally break free so, you have decided to take your books and study hard to get good grades to go to university? so you have picked up a good hobby and try to learn about it and be someone in future? so you want to be an athlete, who is practicing day and night to represent your school in the next athlete meet to be selected for the some other games? Beautiful! LIly Montes!

Very good, self assertion, always healthy, especially when so nicely expressed