Friday, December 25, 2015

I Changed Comments

Rating: 4.8

When I cared it did not matter
When I cried you looked and never said a word
Things that mattered don't anymore
Things that got me don't anymore
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Linn Kelly 13 January 2016

sure@ chinedu

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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2016

Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. It is also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not carefully nurtured by both couples. An insightful depiction of loss of fascination in a stressful relationship, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Linn. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 December 2015

Change is the inherent property of every thing living so there is nothing wrong in the change in outlook about certain things. A thought provoking and meaningful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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