I'd like a grammatical error to rewrite Poem by Herberto Helder

I'd like a grammatical error to rewrite



I'd like a grammatical error to rewrite
the poem of the world on the side of daylight
while God hides the error of the error
on the dark side -
high-voltage gold,
breath in the face.

Monday, July 23, 2018
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