I Didn'T Spring From My Fall Pt.2 Poem by Landrey

I Didn'T Spring From My Fall Pt.2

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Now I see the truth of you and me.
All along you played along for fun.
-but this I cannot handle
-and this I cannot learn from
-scyscraping then the dust bin
-you swept me up like scum
Did I think that I could tie the free? ?
Why not try to kill the noonday sun? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antoine Lavoisier 10 April 2007

very emotionally packed, landrey. the last line is great; the second to last line is perfect...

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