Left Hangin' Poem by Landrey

Left Hangin'

Rating: 4.0


It's like I got fired, my time card expired.
It's like we were talking but got disconnected.
It's like I was swimming then someone pulled the plug.
It's like we were talking but got interrupted.

please learn from what you see.
don't get what I got me.
trust me, this is no fun.
I wish this on no one.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonzo Bandwagoner 15 February 2007

Raw IS the new poetry. (Actually, it is, but oh well) . Anyway, I still like this one a lot. Thanks for posting it.

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Agnes Cawi 14 February 2007

hey landrey i kinda like it..coz it makes me think&i can relate. hey...it aint horrible. -agnes('',)

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Landrey 13 February 2007

I realize that this is more or less HORRIBLE poetry, but it's pretty much raw emotion so there you have it. Unpolished and unconventional and unfiltered. -landrey

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