Wednesday, February 19, 2014

I Died Inside Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was waiting for you all my life.
When you didn’t show up.
I would cry.
When I called you.
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Arica B.
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Loss of love is a terrible experience. You have expressed it severely, " And no one can replace you, Like you replaced me. "… it was easy for you to break up with me. but Not for Me! is what you say. Very powerful, albeit poignant.

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Arica Rowe 28 February 2018

thanks Panda :) I know I'm getting back to this a bit late. sorry about that: (but this was written a while ago when my boyfriend at the time left me for my best friend. but that's all over now I am happily married with a 2 year old :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2017

Write comment. Great imagination, Arica. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 November 2015

Sorry for your loss of love Arica. Every thing happens for our good. May be there is a better life waiting for you. Nice write.

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