Your mother tells you
You’re beautiful and special.
Your mother
Doesn’t know your friends,
Cool music,
Or what is sexy.
Your mother is right.
Enjoy and value your life.
Hi Uriah, Just checking up on you; glad to see some new work posted. :) Happy Columbus Day.
The unconditional love of a mother is indeed beautiful and special. My mother is over 90 years old. But I still prefer her opinion of my poetry above all the others. Take care. Always your friend, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sometimes, being the intense writer's that we have the proclivity to be....we tend to take justified fine detail to an inapropriate plethora of hyperbole, and in doing so, we bury the message we initially intended to deliver, under a mass of verbosity. This simple piece has a voice loud, and pure... and its cherubic message nestles warmly in the mind of this reader.Very Well Done, Uriah, indeed! ~ F j R ~ __2008__