I’m writing the poetry of fragile souls
Sitting quietly in the broken sunlight
Of hopeful but fleeting romance.
I’m gazing into the nearly tearful eyes
Of beautiful women paralyzed
By lost love or unhappy lives,
Waiting for kisses
That somehow missed their lips.
And I want to breathe in their rooms,
Be by their side through turbulent moods,
Find the key to unlock their dreams
Currently hidden in emotional vaults
Or shelved somewhere by men who don’t care.
And the feminine mystery of the eternal Goddess
Continues to relentlessly and mystically possess me,
Aphrodite guides me into pleasant meditation.
I agree, wholeheartedly. The one or two mean-spirited imbeciles who marked this down will have the hex get them and give them Herpes simplex type two. Recurrence every 30 days. Great job Uriah. H
Very nice, Uriah. I like it. Really liked this line: Waiting for kisses That somehow missed their lips - good job.
Uriah... it seems you have gotten in touch with your feminine side... and its very beautiful indeed... well written! -Eila
Excellent work. I love this. 'And the feminine mystery of the eternal Goddes' This is something Ive thought of often, lately. Maybe its from reading Joseph Campbell but that feminine mystery or energy... i seem to have become so receptive over the last 12 months... Its hard to explain, but I have a few theories.
Major Congrats & Mega Kudo's on The PH Poem of The Day, my ole' friend in time & verse...~FjR~
Wonderful composition. The poem portrays the pain and sadness of those hapless women who have been left alone by their stone-heated lovers. It tries to (I quote) : Find the key to unlock their dreams Currently hidden in emotional vaults
Such an encapsulating piece Marvelous
I can dig it but I would use 'hidden' instead of 'hid'. Just me.
i thought the last stanza was a little underdeveloped but that could just be me. otherwise, i thought it was beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Uriah, I think this is an incredible poem... you have recognized the need for validation and respect in every 'eternal goddess'...that every man could be so insightful! ! Bravo! G.