Friday, September 23, 2005

Feminine Mystery Of The Eternal Goddess

Rating: 4.0
I’m writing the poetry of fragile souls
Sitting quietly in the broken sunlight
Of hopeful but fleeting romance.

I’m gazing into the nearly tearful eyes
Of beautiful women paralyzed
By lost love or unhappy lives,
Waiting for kisses
That somehow missed their lips.

And I want to breathe in their rooms,
Be by their side through turbulent moods,
Find the key to unlock their dreams
Currently hidden in emotional vaults
Or shelved somewhere by men who don’t care.

And the feminine mystery of the eternal Goddess
Continues to relentlessly and mystically possess me,
Aphrodite guides me into pleasant meditation.
Uriah Hamilton
Major Congrats & Mega Kudo's on The PH Poem of The Day, my ole' friend in time & verse...~FjR~
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Rajnish Manga 16 June 2015
Wonderful composition. The poem portrays the pain and sadness of those hapless women who have been left alone by their stone-heated lovers. It tries to (I quote) : Find the key to unlock their dreams Currently hidden in emotional vaults
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Such an encapsulating piece Marvelous
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J P Klegg 06 October 2005
I can dig it but I would use 'hidden' instead of 'hid'. Just me.
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Adriana Cruz 03 October 2005
i thought the last stanza was a little underdeveloped but that could just be me. otherwise, i thought it was beautiful.
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Gainor Ventresco 24 September 2005
Uriah, I think this is an incredible poem... you have recognized the need for validation and respect in every 'eternal goddess'...that every man could be so insightful! ! Bravo! G.
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Herbert Nehrlich1 23 September 2005
I agree, wholeheartedly. The one or two mean-spirited imbeciles who marked this down will have the hex get them and give them Herpes simplex type two. Recurrence every 30 days. Great job Uriah. H
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Pamela Davison 23 September 2005
Very nice, Uriah. I like it. Really liked this line: Waiting for kisses That somehow missed their lips - good job.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 23 September 2005
Uriah... it seems you have gotten in touch with your feminine side... and its very beautiful indeed... well written! -Eila
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Enemacles Redux 23 September 2005
Excellent work. I love this. 'And the feminine mystery of the eternal Goddes' This is something Ive thought of often, lately. Maybe its from reading Joseph Campbell but that feminine mystery or energy... i seem to have become so receptive over the last 12 months... Its hard to explain, but I have a few theories.
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