I Don'T Know Poem by lacey schumacher

I Don'T Know

Rating: 5.0


You were a heart, and I was half of the heart. I am like a tear that falls down your face.I shatter into a bunch of pieces. You feel pain, that you seen in my eyes. When I try to make a sound, you ignore it. Because you put a big gap between us when you left me. I feel like I'm in different shades of color. When you are around, you don't look at me. you just point and use hurtful words. And after you were done, You walk away and never looked back. All I felt was pain and sadness.

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Jaqualen Roberts 09 January 2013

the tears coming from my eyes are from excitement i love this

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Justin Chan 30 December 2012

Wow. It conveys the pain really well... More please :)

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