I Don't Understant Poem by HB Rita

I Don't Understant

Rating: 5.0


I don't understand why can't you see
what you are doing is just yelling at me
Open your eyes and take a clear look
You used to read me often like a book
Time has changed as it tends to do
My life is now turning into a zoo
Tears fall hard my head starts to pound
All at once my heart hitting the ground
I don't know what i did
to make you think I can't do anything right;
lately, it seems our heart and
dreams are as different as black and white!

Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 02 April 2019

I don't know what i did to make you think I can't do anything right; lately, it seems our heart and dreams are as different as black and white! disappointment. broken expectations. life and its different forms. thank u very much dear poetess. a fine poem. tony

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HB Rita 09 April 2019

Thank you for the wonderful review Tony

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