I Dreamed A Dream Poem by Arild Ertsland

I Dreamed A Dream

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I dreamed a dream last, and wow was I charmed
Every crook on this ol`planet had been disarmed

Each and everyone of the bad guys..pointet their guns at me
Me thinking..'this is the end to whoever I wanted to be

But still I woke with a peaceful glorie above my head
Coz, out of the gun barrel pops a fancy red rose, colored red

It was then I realized that the bad guys needed an understanding hand
The message..reach out a helping hand before time runs into the sand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Cecile 17 March 2012

This is a uniquely written style that I have not seen often. The pausing in each line has an effect to induce thought. I like the play of words with the common use of sands of time.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 16 March 2012

good message.... great one... your poem has a wisdom and is useful for us

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