I Feel At Peace Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Feel At Peace

Rating: 5.0


Yes, I shall hold evening
And wait for next day morning
To repeat the glory still further
As I am hopeful of golden future

I shall toil hard
Full day and look no backward
The sweating in noon may add more
As body may turn little black in color

It is real joy
To struggle hard and enjoy
It may not be sufficient to hold ground
But happiness and confidence is certainly found

Day may prove as real challenge
Only I have little problem to manage
Whole day I toil but get little in return
May be it still needs more energy to burn?

I shall turn the tide
With horse to ride
The journey may be long
But I shall be the one among

I have full evening at the end
To see family and friends
The meal I take has more taste in it
I feel world at peace when all greet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

I like the message and the vibe Anonymous44 minutes ago But missing clarity, I'm still not totally sure what it's about.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

power... Guilty Pleasure41 minutes ago in its honesty. words are like fine silk stranding a tapestry of life. Good job, Poet. Comment 0 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Victor Petrescu46 minutes ago Good job Comment +1 I like the message and the vibe

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2013

Yes, I shall hold evening And wait for next day morning

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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