Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 452,105 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Feel Same - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I feel same

Saturday, January 13,2018
7: 39 AM

I feel same way as you do
Same ordeal I pass through
Even though it is unethical
But I am helpless as an individual

I know you can't disclose
Even if you choose
To reveal
As feelings are real

But how to come forward
And put a word
To acknowledge in true sense
It was making me tense

It may not be lust
Or lack of trust
But since I chose to be first
I must make it last impression too

Well! say nothing on face
But keep same stance
I shall read in eyes
Without making try

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Comments about I Feel Same by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (1/16/2018 12:20:00 PM)


    dear poet, we all sensitive minds exactly “feel same“. a very sensitive poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/12/2018 8:26:00 PM)


    Well! say nothing on face
    But keep same stance
    I shall read in eyes
    Without making try
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 12, 2018



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