I Feel So Young Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Feel So Young

Rating: 2.8


I feel so young
Not because doing something wrong
But always remain in good company
Friends and readers make it all funny

Money is not a problem
I need not struggle and concern
I can afford little for this hobby
As I have powerful lobby

Friends criticize and tease
Some may say “correct grammar please”
“Is English not your first language”?
I feel sorry but quiet hopefully manage

I write with open mind
Be remain simple and kind too
I try to compromise with their request
Their advice is solution and I hope it is best

I put lots of energy inside
Stuff it with ideas and keep horizon very wide
Any paragraph can be put aside
There won’t be difference even slight

This is beauty of an article
You are always in circle
Somebody may say it is forced
Some one may appreciate with word” liked’

It has been made my living empire
I am the king and queen to admire
I see and hear long shouts in praise
My hands go up in air with “thanks “and rise

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2013

good poem Niki Brahma2 minutes ago it is a very simple and cute poem... Comment +1 Interesting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2013

James Lee4 minutes ago Not personally my style, but I like the message.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2013

James Lee4 minutes ago Not personally my style, but I like the message.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 October 2013

I feel so young Not because doing something wrong

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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