Saturday, July 26, 2008

I Fell Before You A Broken Man Comments

Rating: 4.0

I had no answers to your questions
I could find no words to appease you
I tried but could not please
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James Comerford
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Greenwolfe 1962 01 August 2008

This poem is just like the first. In terms of quality and meaning, they are derived from the same place. I might prefer more variety, but if these are the only two of their kind I won't complain. GW62

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