I Hate... Poem by miesha devres

I Hate...

Rating: 4.1


I hate the way you act
I hate the way you dress
I hate the way you smell
And you hair looks a mess

I hate the way you tease
I hate the way you beg
I hate the way you talk
And I hate your hairy legs

I hate all you friends
And your family to boot
But i still find myself falling in love with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erasmo . 01 August 2006

still lacks something wouldn't you say? it still needs a transition between hate and devotion...perhaps you could make it longer?

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Lylyanna Pilewski 16 February 2006

aww that was so cute i like it. Lylyanna

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