I Hold It In Poem by Saint Cynosure

I Hold It In

Rating: 5.0


I hold it in,
cant let it out,
Its a fear for me to show.
For if she feels a different way,
my future seems unknown.
I want so much to be the man,
she feels she cant let go.
To show her love with honor,
a love so few have known.
Be for her,
her everything,
in every kind of way.
By her side to share with her,
every single day.
Comfort her in times of need,
the servant at her feet.
But I hold it in,
cant let it out,
a secret shared with me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 03 November 2008

I want so much to be the man, she feels she cant let go. To show her love with honor, a love so few have known. any good man would feel that way towards his love, you just put it in words. good job. Becca

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totally disturbed 17 August 2008

I like this alot of course I like anything you write. Wendy

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Viola Grey 17 August 2008

let it out.....it will eat you up...V

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