Wednesday, October 29, 2014

I Know What It Means To Be Alone Comments

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I know what it means to be alone
These days it's all I know
And I wonder if it will reach an end.
It's not the way I used to breathe
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Leah Ayliffe
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Jessica Dehn 11 November 2014

Wow wonderful work here! You can truely feel your need from start to finish!

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Piyush Dey 06 November 2014

nice write. lot of deep sentiments. I like the lines- I want to find my way home to me I want to find my way home and stay.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 03 November 2014

A hollowness, emptiness, It came to a stop. A heart felt poem with feelings of loneliness.In life pain and pleasure go hand in hand. One who bears pain gets pleasure. Well done Keep it up. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Savita Tyagi 29 October 2014

Sad but very powerful sentiments. Lonliness is a virus that attacks all of us any where any time of life. But it is short lived and one must fight it with all its might. You have expressed the emotion so well in this poem.

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