I know what it means to be alone
These days it's all I know
And I wonder if it will reach an end.
It's not the way I used to breathe
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nice write. lot of deep sentiments. I like the lines- I want to find my way home to me I want to find my way home and stay.
A hollowness, emptiness, It came to a stop. A heart felt poem with feelings of loneliness.In life pain and pleasure go hand in hand. One who bears pain gets pleasure. Well done Keep it up. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Sad but very powerful sentiments. Lonliness is a virus that attacks all of us any where any time of life. But it is short lived and one must fight it with all its might. You have expressed the emotion so well in this poem.
Wow wonderful work here! You can truely feel your need from start to finish!