Saturday, October 5, 2013

I'Ll Be Watching You Everyday - A Message From Heaven Comments

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Never should your heart feel lonely
though I may seem far away.
From a place up in the heavens
I’ll be watching you everyday.
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Tom Krause
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Kim Barney 13 December 2015

This is a beautiful poem, Tom. However, as a former English teacher, I can't resist pointing out that in this case, EVERY DAY should be two words, not one. The word EVERYDAY does exist, but it is an adjective, as in: These towels are for everyday use. So it should be changed in line four, the last line, and the title. Sorry to sound negative. As I said, it's a beautiful poem. Well done!

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Marvin Brato 07 October 2013

True love lingers beyond time and space...it reaches the heavens to watch over the beloved!

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Valerie Dohren 05 October 2013

A lovely poem Tom. Having just lost my husband, this brings comfort to me. Thank you.

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