Tuesday, May 6, 2014

I'Ll Live A Vagabond Comments

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I'm a dead body delivered by the sea
Under the sands..a strange thing like burners
'lifeless ''
No trail for my being alive except
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Naima khlifi
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Tajudeen Shah 09 May 2014

Dear Poet, the theme itself is wonderful.i am sure, the english version is translated by someone. good. but, i request you to learn english language and literature so that you can be yourself in your lines. any expert translation would have its limitations, as the soul is different. i hope you understand this, and agree with me. now, your poem is really engaging. highly passionate and sensible too. ' I' ve got no crown except my poem and flowers I' ve got no age but only love and existence..' WONDERFUL. God Bless.

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