I Lost My Mind On The Way To Your Heart Poem by Anna Pacheco

I Lost My Mind On The Way To Your Heart

Rating: 3.2


I lost my mind on the way to your heart
I lost my way on the road to your mind
I have much information to impart
Though I keep it all inside in a bind
I would like you to know all that I feel
Even though shy and quiet as a mouse
I would like you to know that I am real
So you will know if I should be your spouse
Plus we are so much alike, you and I
If we do not meet it would be a shame
It’s so confusing and I don’t know why
Somehow making it all seem like a game
Know you can come to me just as you are
Because you’ll always be my shining star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 11 April 2008

This poem was cleverly phrased and sounded very good indeed. Thanks Anna.

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Tanika Jack 19 November 2007

i really liked this poem its something i really can get into

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Jasbir Chatterjee 13 August 2015

Your poem has already reached my heart. Thanks for sharing.

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John Richter 13 August 2015

ok... I'm Sold Anna! I'm on my way down to Miami right now... I've been looking for you for 40 years! I hope you like smoked sausage and sauer-kraut, mashed potatoes and rhubarb pie....

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Kinyua Karanja 13 August 2015

Lovely poem, It's like adding anything on it will spoil the taste.

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Ramesh T A 13 August 2015

A nice love sonnet to read and appreciate the poet!

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Mark Nwagwu 21 April 2008

a flowing surreal poem - come to me just as you are - for to me the way you are is the way I see you and want you to be that wqe may be truly one.... great

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