I Love You Poem by craig smith

I Love You

Rating: 4.5


eight characters
two white spaces
but man
are they powerful

tingling fingers
the words short
take hours, to type

nervous energy runs
from my deepest emotion

always I see
always I want
always in front of me

I want to scream
I am fighting
fighting my fears, living in my head

these three words let me escape

I LOVE YOU

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 02 July 2008

Bravo Craig! An awesome poem, so very well executed, a delight to read indeed! ! *10*! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Joey Habib 02 July 2008

them 3 words are the e-z'st to write but the hardest to say... i enjoyed it... keep poetry alive....

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those 3 words scare me SOOO bad... i like this one; good job x3, mill

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Catherine Rica Cosico 02 July 2008

These 3 words are so powerful...it can build or ruin a man or a woman...Fine write! ! ! I enjoyed reading... Cate

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