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I Love You Goodbye...

Rating: 5.0

rain is falling on the ground
here i am trying not to make a sound
i open the door
and fall to the floor
down the steps
into the depths
shadows everywhere
but i toss my head with out a care
twirling and spinning out in the cold
i'm twelve and hope i never get old
i love the thought of you being here
it brings all the warmness to my heart very near
in the middle of the road
i found a dear toad
a speeding car takes me by surprise
standing here i take back all my lies
i love you, i love you, i love you goodbye
i'm lying on the ground sarting to die...

5/2/2006 5: 28 p.m.

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