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I Love You, Love You, Say Do You Love Me, Love Me?

I love you, love you, love you,
I love you, love you,
Say, do you love me?
I love you, love you,
Say, say do you love me, love me?

I love you, love you, say do you love me,
Love me?
O, I love you so much, I love you so much,
Ay, you love me,

How much do you love me?
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Rajnish Manga 16 November 2014

I would like to appreciate your sentiments running through the entire poem but there a lack of cohesion and rationale from one stanza to the next and so on. The length of your poem could be easily reduced to half of its present size. There should be brevity in your expression. I extend my best wishes to you, Bijay Kant ji.

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ashton 05 October 2018

that is not ritgh

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