In a very sweet and sonorous voice, sing you, say you,
Said she the girl in a golden and nasal sound of her own,
Do you love me? Do you love me?
The voice coming from the heart and its deep within
Yes, I love you, I love you,
Came the answer reverberating from the other side.
Again,
Sing it again, ladies and gentlemen, said the announcer,
Do you love me? Do you love me?
Yes, I love you, I love you.
Do you love me? Yes, I love you.
Do you love me? Yes, I love you,
The beloved went on asking in a very singsong voice of her own
And the coampanion too went on saying lyrically.
O, it was a nice combination to see the hearts meeting,
Feeling good to see them united! ,
Came the comment from the elderly audience.
Just fantastic. I adore this poem with its callings. Lilting and angelic but direct regarding the sad resounding and repeated doubt. Love the match made for this wondering woman. Happy end with a match to cancel out potential despair and lack of validation. We all need it. Lovely just lovely. I invite you to read my writing nymph, the characters do very much parallel one another.well done.
Just fantastic. I adore this poem with its callings. Lilting and angelic but direct regarding the sad resounding and repeated doubt. Love the match made for this wondering woman. Happy end with a match to cancel out potential despair and lack of validation. We all need it. Lovely just lovely. I invite you to read my writing nymph, the characters do very much parallel one another.well done.
I favorited this in my poems. Thank you for creating it.
Several lines of this poem have been lifted from your own poem Love Me, Love Me, You Just Love Me. 'Do you love me? ' is the poet's repeated refrain but towards the end you lalk about the meeting of hearts. You could have treated the subject with a greater sense of maturity.
O, it was a nice combination to see the hearts meeting, Feeling good to see them united! , Came the comment from the elderly audience. love, relationship. living always n love is always a gift of God. we humans alone with our power cannot do it always. thank u. tony
well writing: heart song is beautifully reflected in this poem
The song which flows from heart becomes attractive and touching and adorable.This poem is one of them which justifies its title. Dear Dr. Dubey, you have astutely presented this poem. I quote... Do you love me? Do you love me? The voice coming from the heart and its deep within Yes, I love you, I love you, Came the answer reverberating from the other side. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Just fantastic. I adore this poem with its callings. Lilting and angelic but direct regarding the sad resounding and repeated doubt. Love the match made for this wondering woman. Happy end with a match to cancel out potential despair and lack of validation. We all need it. Lovely just lovely. I invite you to read my writing nymph, the characters do very much parallel one another.