Monday, November 25, 2013

I Love You No More Comments

Rating: 4.5

Yes for sure you took my breath away
The very day I set my eyes upon you
Butterflies in my stomach controlled not,
Signal of something strong within me
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paul Orina
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Chinedu Dike 06 August 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. It can be whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning, especially when it is not carefully nurtured by both couples. A well articulated piece of poetry portraying resolve to jettison vain glorification of beauty, occasioned by distress in bliss of love. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing Paul. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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