Sunday, February 17, 2008

I’m Hopeless And Happy Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dreams are undone in the wintry Midwest
Freezing on the broken sidewalks of insanity
With snowflakes of loneliness and sorrow
Falling like scattered poems waiting to be written
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Ivy Christou 22 March 2008

THis was brilliant too Uriah, your poetry is always full of emotions so eleganlty put.. Hope you are well, HBH

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Amberlee Carter 28 February 2008

I'm going to pretend that this line: 'Falling like scattered poems waiting to be written And later given to a melancholy girl Trying to survive in the heartbreak world.' is written for me... :) beautiful poem my friend, you are so amazing, and I've missed you.

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Sandra Fowler 27 February 2008

Superb write. Wonderful use of simile and metaphor. My hat is off to you, brave friend. Warm regards, Sandra

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