I'M So Confused Poem by michael hubbert

I'M So Confused

Rating: 5.0


I'm so confused, I can't think straight
the things I do, are second rate
Is this the way to seal my fate?
I'm hoping that it's not

I bog down in the little stuff
the things I do aren't good enough
what should be smooth, is very rough
I'm giving all I got

I truely want to do things right
I'm trying hard, with all my might
I'm holding on so very tight
my stomach's in a knot


I know that when I settle down
and get my feet back on the ground
the rest of me will come around
to take that final shot!

Wednesday, September 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: confused
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 October 2008

SIMPLE AND EASY USAGE OF WORDS... :)

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David Threadgold 03 September 2008

Hi Michael. Another punchy little number. not at all confused from what I see. well done a good read ***(10) *** I think. Regards Dave T.

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