Nicole Jaimie Carothers

Rookie (Glendale, CA)

I Made You Up - Poem by Nicole Jaimie Carothers

You were everything I wanted
perfectly complete.

You were anything honest
anything unique.

Beautifully beautifully lovely.

Brilliantly brilliantly radiant.

Something I wasnt
Geniously my opposite.

Too bad
underneath the image
I hadnt realized...

I made you up.

I made you everything I wanted to be.

I made you exactly to fit me.

Beautifully beautifully ugly.

Brilliantly brilliantly dark.

You were everything I wanted
imperfectly complete.

You were brutally honest,
disgustingly unique...


Comments about I Made You Up by Nicole Jaimie Carothers

  • Brian Jani (5/5/2014 2:33:00 PM)


    Interesting poem Jamie (Report) Reply

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  • (8/30/2006 1:27:00 AM)


    a cruel reality depicted with no fail! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 1, 2006


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