Thursday, December 10, 2015

I Miss You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every day's the same.
I walk past your picture with the same feeling of despair.
It might be pathetic or lame,
But I can't help but wince or stare.
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Marissa Vega
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Chinedu Dike 23 December 2015

An insightful depiction of pains and sorrows that infest minds of bereaved, as they struggled to come to terms with irreplaceable loss of loved ones, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with good rhyme scheme. Lovely piece of poetry nicely written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Marissa. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Rowdy Solomon 10 December 2015

I can definitely relate and feel the desire to be with a loved one again in this piece. Nice scribe!

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Kelly Kurt 10 December 2015

Death eventually touches us all. Mourning is natural and necessary. Thanks, Marissa

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