Saturday, December 20, 2014

I Miss You Dad Comments

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I was only six months old
When mom told me had you died.
I didn't fully know what it meant.
I felt numb, but I still cried.
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Sharen Suren
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Chinedu Dike 29 October 2019

Deep sad feelings nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Sharen.

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Paul Sebastian 06 January 2015

Dear Sharen, What a lovely poem about your dad! You have fond memories of him to treasure. Great write! You may want to correct 'hear' to 'here' in the last stanza. Paul Sebastian

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