Wednesday, August 16, 2017

I Need The Sunshine Comments

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I need the sunshine
As I wake up from the dream
To make my life beautiful
Full of verve and energy as a stream
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Valsa George 16 August 2017

I need the sunshine To be a man wise and brave To feel His presence in me As my steps drag me toward my grave Salient thoughts......! A beautiful supplication......asking for light!

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2017

Feeling flattered receiving support from an awesome poetess. My regards.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 August 2017

need the sunshine To feel its warmth on my face To receive love from heaven To have a life full of beauty and grace.. it is spiritual poem . great about love, peace, care, heaven, God.. love this poem very much. i like spiritual poems very much. thank you dear poet. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2017

The world is going through a difficult time. There is rise in violence everywhere and mankind needs peace and love. Inspired by your comment Sir. Regards.

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Captain Cur 16 August 2017

As we all struggle along that path, let us honor the light and love inherent in our small universe. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2017

I am glad you liked it Sir. Thanks very much.

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2017

Such a calm and peaceful write, it wonderfully have a warm sunshine here as i can feel it through lines by lines...the last line is not sad but about the beautiful door as we need and wish one day to go. nice one Tiku!

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2017

Humble thanks for reading and giving wonderful comment. Regards.

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