I Once Knew Poem by Haven Fulford

I Once Knew

Rating: 4.4


I once knew a very nice man
he always smiled but needed a tan

I once knew a little girl
she had the cutest little curl

We once knew a loving mother
she was caring and so sweet

We once knew her devilish smile
she would make us wonder all worth while

she loved and cared but moved away
in a house so far away

she visits once a year we keep hoping
but we sit around just moping

I once knew a loving Mother
now she is in memory's

she visits every year
i wish it could be more

I wish we could start over
and be a family for eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like this poem because it reminds me of how people come and go in your life. And they will always be the one memory u havr of home. Great write you get my 10 to the fullest. =]

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Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

a house isn't a home...strained or lost relations...subtle nostalgic write...10

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Shy Beauty Raven 07 May 2009

Hey haven at the end it sounds like our mom is dead and thats not good people will get the wrond picture

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 October 2009

your words are well expressed!

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Vijay Menon 30 September 2009

good lines and a nice poem

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Kevin Fisher 15 September 2009

sad but true this is worth 10 I'll remember this poem always

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Kendra Renee 07 September 2009

this is so sad is dis true

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I like this poem because it reminds me of how people come and go in your life. And they will always be the one memory u havr of home. Great write you get my 10 to the fullest. =]

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