I Promise Poem by Mishack O Madubandlela

I Promise

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Here I am, giving you my whole heart
laying it down at your disposal
I don't want an opposing proposal

Foolish as it may sound,
I promise that I will stick around
I want to make you the happiest girl alive
My day just got brighter,
your face truly shines brighter
I will make your house a home

I see her looking at flowers,
she says that it's beautiful here
I say "it just got a lot more beautiful"
She says "the flowers are pretty"
I say "the person looking at them is pretty"
she smiles and says to me, "would you like to go for a drink? "
I say to her, "my life just got more meaningful"

I shower you with compliments each time we meet
I wipe the crumbs off your lips with mine when we eat
I give you something to smile about each night when you lie in your bed
I make your days brighter than the previous

The early signs of love,
sweet and fun are at the cornerstone
but is this how it ends?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem you can relate to if ever you've felt love at first sight. I think love at first sight is not necessarily the first glance, as it's depicted. But it's the first impressions that the person makes that make you feel super welcomed. This perks shows my feelings about a person I met and felt immediately in love with. I hope you can also enjoy the poem and relate. I love it
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