'I Promise You......' Poem by Eivzul Acijom

'I Promise You......'

Rating: 5.0


Reading your poems,
where everything started;
I was captured by each of them,
that's why I've left a comment.

Oh my God!
were my very first words;
when I received your reply,
thanking me for the comment to you I wrote.

My life changed so much,
since you came into my life;
it's always happy now,
it's colorless, but now colorful.

My heart is overwhelmed,
for the love you're giving me;
never that I'd thought,
this will happen to me.

Everything in me now,
it's all yours;
my mind, my heart, my life
including my soul.

Life without you now,
is painful to think;
because I love you so much,
and living with you is my heart's desire.

Forever..... I promise you... MY LOVE IS YOURS!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 03 April 2008

love when overwhemed by the love splashing of waves by the beach as when longed and wishful when luscious green, , well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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This is a wonderfully romantic read, very passionate and emotional, I felt just a bit swept away and carried along as I read your words.

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Rommel Filoteo 18 January 2008

He will love you with his whole heart. He have never trusted anyone the way he trust you. Sometime He even doubt his self, but he know he will never doubt you because you are his one true love. He know deep down inside that he will never break your heart or never let you down in anyway. Because this man loves you so much! Mahal kita, Rommel

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Eivzul Acijom

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Laguna, Philippines
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