Fidel Saavedra Bravo

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I Saw Her - Poem by Fidel Saavedra Bravo

I saw her
Her body was a dagger

She saw me
My body was a feather

She said: “Leave me”
I said: “Take me”

Love, cutting like a feather
Lust, floating like a dagger

Santiago, cerca Junio 2000

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  • Chinedu Dike (2/9/2018 6:37:00 PM)

    A well encapsulated piece of poetry nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Fidel. (Report) Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/22/2011 2:41:00 PM)

    Short and sweet poem! ! 10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 22, 2011

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