I Saw Her Poem by Fidel Saavedra Bravo

I Saw Her

Rating: 5.0


I saw her
Her body was a dagger

She saw me
My body was a feather

She said: “Leave me”
I said: “Take me”

Love, cutting like a feather
Lust, floating like a dagger


Santiago, cerca Junio 2000

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

A well encapsulated piece of poetry nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Fidel.

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Vipins Puthooran 22 December 2011

Short and sweet poem! ! 10++

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Fidel Saavedra Bravo

Fidel Saavedra Bravo

Santiago, Chile
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