I Searched For God, I Found God Everywhere Comments

The rythymn of your poem surprises me. I expect it to flow, but it pauses before continuing. I expect it to say nothing new, and in a way, it doesn't (it is about God, and he has had a lot of comments about him) , but yet it leaves me with the impression that I have seen something new, because of the freshness of life. God has given us so much. I hope he blesses you and uses your poems to touch someone's heart.