I See Poem by Sue Anne

I See

Rating: 5.0


I see the beach
Sand
Sea.
Laughter
Music perhaps.

I see people
Not many.
Everywhere
Moving
Doing their thing.

I see you
Smiling.
Speaking
Drinking
A can in hand.

I see the party
Packing
Leaving.
Happy?
Heading for home.

I see this picture
In my mind.
Miles away, no sand, no sea
No laughter
No you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A very nice poem with a sad ending. The reality is that life has its sad endings, especially as it relates to relational loss. keep on writing.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 26 October 2008

without you 'love' no happiness, , , thanks for sharing

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