Wednesday, June 18, 2008

I Shall Ask Thee Comments

Rating: 3.5

I arise from the depth of my being
My mind on fire by the subtle touch of yours
Letting me in my flight in accompaniment
Of the angels and in search of the lovers
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Kesav Easwaran 18 June 2008

...While I wake up With my mind on fire I search... i like very much the way the poem concludes...all creations all deeds here good or bad get stored in earth's womb... good mystic inerplay...

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M M 18 June 2008

What beautiful lines, Sadiqullah! Captivating imagery created by perfectly well chosen words and theme. I like the way you play with the four elements (mind on fire, earth, air -angels and flight-, holly rivers) to introduce us into your deep mystical quieries. A great poem! 10 :)

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Rani Turton 18 June 2008

Magnificent poem aflame with the mystic quest, beautifully worded. Sadiqullah at his best.

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