I Shall Neither Care Nor Dream Poem by Elias Barcelona

I Shall Neither Care Nor Dream

Rating: 5.0


I shall neither care
Nor dream
About she
Who notices me
(at best)
I shall neither dream
Nor care
For a love
We could share
Or should i tell her
Tell her that i care
Tell her that i dream
I shall! !
I enter the trial
Her picture becomes blurry
Her smile
My heart begins to hurry
Hi im in your
Chem class
I think we could have
A love that last
She looks through me
Like polished glass
Do i know you?
Mr. chem class
Mr. finish last
Stunned and amazed
A spell shes cast
To destory and faze
If id never dreamed
Nor cared
Id remain unfazed, unawared
That your not the girl i dream of
Shes not there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinki Nandy 25 June 2010

you shall never stop dreaming coz the day you do, you stop living. emotional write.

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Ellery Lim 05 June 2010

i love the rhythms in your poems. three liner. amazed and in shock. good job

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Benjamin Coomer 03 June 2010

great poem with an amazing ending

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Preetam Shetty 03 June 2010

A simple 10/10 should say it all

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Robin Machorro 23 May 2010

wow... that was really amazing it made me speechless great job :)

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