Wednesday, September 6, 2006

I Should Have Told Him Comments

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His words cut through the war in my head
Telling me, I’d be loved, to go back to bed

I should have told him then
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Ruth Gordon
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Dee Daffodil 24 October 2006

Lovely poem! It's always a shame, when people change, or leave and we are left feeling like we have unfinished business. Sadly, I know of no way to heal the hole that developes in one's soul when that happens...perhaps time...perhaps the words still need to be uttered, no matter what...perhaps...it's never really too late... Hugs, Dee

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Kailynd McGregor 19 September 2006

wow, great job. wonderfully written!

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