I StıLl Welcome The RaıN Poem by abhilash patra

I StıLl Welcome The RaıN

Rating: 5.0


A storm is continuing in relations
Still I welcome the rain
Without any suffocation
Converting every sorrow
To delightful moment
Enjoying each drop
of rain as a new event.

Individual drops are important
To grow even grasses
Likewise every sec is required
To avoid all relation crashes.

Rain never was so pain full for me
feeling lonely to face my nativity
A heavy rain cleans all the dirt of city
Showing the lesson us to vanish coldness from anxiety,

I love to walk in the rain
Changing my destiny in Shane
Carrying all drops over my shoulder
With a hope to come over

The raw smell of first rain
Reflecting beauty of earth’s gain
With never ending pain
I still welcome the rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 June 2011

Good poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Very well conceived. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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